Hey Max,
Your sentence was fine, except one thing, when you said "Te quiere" at the end, it's "Te Quiero" (I Love You) or you can use "Te quiere, Max" (Max loves you) That one doesn't sound so great in English but in Spanish it makes sense. That's my advice.
Where are you from that you don't know Spanish, or were you never taught it? Just curious, you don't have to answer if you don't want to.
See ya.
