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Old 12th May 2000, 16:23
ChiRican ChiRican is offline
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Really- I din't read his bio- just the poem

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Old 18th May 2000, 12:38
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La Ventana

Para que puedas entrar,
voy a abrir una ventana.
La abrire de par en par
para que llegues con la brisa.
Te esperare con calma,
a flor de labios mil sonrisas
y con el alma cerrada
guardare nuestros dias,
hasta que esta casa vacia
que te anora y que te espera,
vuelva a tener en su vera
la presencia de tu hombria.
Y yo, en mi mano vacia
sienta tu tierna caricia.

Para que puedas entrar,
voy a abrir una ventana.

IDJ
1998, NYC

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Old 23rd May 2000, 14:56
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Parece que no le gusto esta poesia a nadie.
Que pena porque la escribi yo!

Feedback is welcome.
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Old 23rd May 2000, 15:07
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I just saw it and I kindda liked it. Hey my website will be finished in a few more weeks and I have a poetry section and I would love to post some of your poems.

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Old 24th May 2000, 07:35
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Chi:

Let me know when you're ready and I'll email you some of my better works. None of the Bubble Gum stuff I've posted here.

Thanks.

IDJ
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Old 30th May 2000, 20:41
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HOLA ESTO ESTA MUY BUENO YA ERA TIEMPO QUE HUBIERA UN LUGAR ASI EN EL INTERNET CON POESIA PERO ME DA LASTIMA QUE NO HAYAN LUGARES DEDICADOS A LA POESIA NEGROIDE ESAS DE LUIS PALES MATOS FORTUNATO VIZCARRONDO ,Y ESOS POETAS ;Y ESAS POESIAS QUE FUERON HECHAS FAMOSAS POR JUAN BORIA. eSTOY LOCO DE CONSEGUIR ESAS POESIAS PERO VIVIENDO FUERA DE pr SE ME HACE IMPOSIBLE CREES QUE PUEDAS PONER MAS POESIA NEGROIDE EN EL INTERNET? SI PUEDES TE SERIA MUY AGRADECIDO PUES LLEVO TIEMPO BUSCANDO ESTO EN EL INTER. Y NO LO
CONSIGO

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Old 1st June 2000, 07:16
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Quote:
Originally posted by IDeJesus:
La Ventana

Para que puedas entrar,
voy a abrir una ventana.
La abrire de par en par
para que llegues con la brisa.
Te esperare con calma,
a flor de labios mil sonrisas
y con el alma cerrada
guardare nuestros dias,
hasta que esta casa vacia
que te anora y que te espera,
vuelva a tener en su vera
la presencia de tu hombria.
Y yo, en mi mano vacia
sienta tu tierna caricia.

Para que puedas entrar,
voy a abrir una ventana.

IDJ
1998, NYC

[This message has been edited by IDeJesus (edited 18 May 2000).]

IDJ,

You wrote it and it comes from your heart, it sounds beautiful to me! Well done.

Sincerely,
Raul Rosas
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