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Old 11th November 2001, 21:34
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While in the military service a man falls in love with a woman, his location about 3000 miles away, hostile and dangerous. A two year tour, only four months into the commitment. The Love so strong, felt and communicated as if he was near, yet so far...

The Love That I Feel

Incomprehensible, yet I understand!, invisible, yet I can see!, Painful yet I need it! and edible yet without it I will definitely die. The love that I feel, I cannot explain in this life time. I have not the opportunity in this world to manifest or to express my love to you. THis feeling is so intense, so profundly intense and so infinite is beyond my reason. Ohhh My Creator!, I ask and implore to please give me life to show her what I feel, to fill her with this illuminating, insaciable and bottomless love...Ohh God! All I want to do is give her this wonderful feeling, all I want is to give happiness to her soul.

The love that I feel gooes far beyond any imagination, like flying without wings, like walking on water, and loving without love. This pain is agonizing because you are not near, but you are...I see you in the clear immense sky, I smell you in the flowers, I touch you everytime I think of you. I need you forever!!

God Almighty this love that I feel is because of you, Creator! I feel love because I am part of you, You gave this feeling to me, please let me share this beautiful feeling with her, this precious feeling. God Almighty I can imagine how you feel because you are Love, because You love us, yet we are so far. That is why I understand how I can love her even though she is far. That is why I need not physically touch her, I know I love her forever.

I can see the invisible, when I remember...my heart beats hard, I breath rapidly and smile, because I can see her... I really see her! I remember her mysterious green eyes, her long perfumed scent hair, her perfect pearl skin, her impeccable perfect body and I remember... I love you forever.

The love that I feel is as grandious as the universe, as pure as a new born infant, as clean as newly open white scented rose. Sometimes I want to scream, "I LOVE YOU"!, so hard my love, but I know you already feel how much I love you. If I can just hold you in my arms right this moment, if I can just listen to your musical voice, my love I can see you, I do... Soon I will be home and marry.
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Old 11th November 2001, 21:43
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Conciencia,
Beautiful and passionate poem. Lucky is the woman that possess the love that inspired you to write it.

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Old 11th November 2001, 22:36
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